From Percy's Attractions and Distractions/A smile to light a Tapir's Touchpaper.
Caused his quills to stand up on end.
Percy watched her fly around and sniffing the air in the jungle undergrowth.CHANGE.
Percy watched her flying around and sniffing the air in the jungle undergrowth
fly around and sniff the air ++++
It seemed that in was not only sunlight which damaged the....
It seemed that it was not only sunbeams/sun* which damaged the ....
shake his head in order to bring him/himself back to his senses....
Henrietta -
change to transfixation....
Beryl Sorry
that it was - not that is was....
Tremane insert comma after He added and before next quote marks. Also isert line feed at dialogue earlier from Trevalyan
Make sure Buzby is that all through and not Busby.
Buzby's crash. Upward bent or Upwardly bent beak.
On island with Beryl - but I think it has been altered however - event he should be even the ++
From the Tinkertooth booth. Delete one of the Trevalyan asked's as only one is required.....
A reminder to see if Arachnaphobe is better or worse than arachnapod.....
Geckos don't make a noise so find something else to make a din in Gerome's grass or re-word it. That goes with all Gecko stories.
Think about Gerome's tongue as pro-longed and not long and pronged? Or something less messy.
Check through Daisy's story as the tenses are totally out and words missing. Also put the crows back in at the beginning somewhere before the brook and her tripping over the socks.
Henrietta is sitting a position that she is NOT used to or she would not be in pain!!1
