so apparently disaronno brings out the poet in me..or maybe my muse has finally returned, im not sure which. but as i was sitting here the words just kept flowing in my head so i scribbled them down and now im going to do something totally uncharacteristic and share it with you all. it was very strange..i felt much like thad beaumont from stephen king's "the dark half". for anyone who isnt familar with it..the guy basically blacks out and writes things but its not actually him writing it..its his "evil twin" that resides in his head, but ends up not being just a figment of his imagination. i say this because i dont remember writing all this down..all i know is that when i was done i had an entire page full of stuff. and im not drunk..ive only had one drink. anyone who knows me knows it takes a lot more than that lol. so anyway here it is. please keep in mind that i havent written anything since high school so i'm a bit rusty and poetry has never been my strong suit anyway. as i reread this it sounds like it should be poetry from a kid still in junior high, basically because of the rhyming i think..hope you enjoy!
Beautiful Deception
I am not the one who you should try to analyze
With deceiving eyes
And in your sky of perfect blue
You think I'm the one who is deceiving you
But you will find when I am gone and you are all alone
That your wreckless heart has turned mine to stone
There is no pill to take that will make you well
So join me here in our private hell
Where I feel like a caged animal
Waiting here with minimal patience
Did you really think that you could fake this?
All your lies and empty words
Are nothing more than a muted blur
As I wait for the inevitable
The downfall will be incredible
And my heart looks so edible to your apathetic eyes
No more lies
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