i just wrote this poem, im not sure if its finished or not, please leavea comment and let me know what you think
"First Love"
Do you remember your first love,
And how it made you feel.
And when that person came around,
It felt like time stood still.
I remember being shy,
And unable to tell her.
When i looked deep into her eyes,
I could'nt find the words.
Now that i think back,
It should have been easy,
I should have said "I love you"
And told her how deeply.
That when she left there came a pain,
and an overwhelming loneliness.
That i thought about her everyday,
And the best way to confess,
the deepest of emotions,
That i have ever felt,
And i never thought it possible,
That my ice cold heart would melt.
I remember butterflies,
And a tingling in my spine.
That you had the most amazing eyes,
And that I blushed when they met mine.
All it took was your smile,
To make everything okay
No matter how bad I felt,
It brightened up my day.
I remember how love songs,
Started to make sense
And for the first time in my life,
I wanted to listen,
To every word they sang,
And i know i sang them too,
Because when on the radio they came,
It reminded me of you.
