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Athemea's blog: "Poem"

created on 10/17/2007  |  http://fubar.com/poem/b142558

Another Poem

This is something my friend wrote for me that I personally loved and decided to post it on here. Righteous I found her first at evening Prayer Inside the small stone church So shoulder-stooped, so wan with care The object of my search She would not heed my tale at first I'm told it's often so She neither fought nor cried nor cursed She just simply answered, "No." Just "No" and turned I ran behind to ask, "How can you know?" "For God is good, and God is kind, and would not curse me so." But she could not for long deny The power in her veins She said, "Christ suffered--so shall I to thank him for his pains." And she she trained; she studied, fought, preparing for her war She soaked up all that could be taught and still desired more No longer pale, but flush with life she strengthened every day Young men, on hunt to find a wife, surprised, looked her way But like a nun, she'd none of love She could not be seduced For she had Him who reigned above And more, she had St Just St Just had been a vampire long before my father's birth And where he went came Hell along to burn the cursed earth And word throughout the village spread As I'd already learned The neighboring towns lay bathed in red St Just had this way turned They huddled in the darkening church Their terrors running wild Til softly, from his stony perch The Reverened Father smiled "The shephered does not leave behind the lamb that tiring, falls And God is good, and God is kind He will protect these walls." The walls withstood St Just, it's true He could not smash them in But since he's learned to climb, he knew he'd have the meat within It Started by the eastern gate One family, still abed Their child cried out for help--too late And fear like fire spread "To Arms!" the men were called, but none was man enough to fight In St Just's way there stood but one One maiden, dressed in white And those that dared to look that night A glorious tale could tell The girl who faced the devil's might And sent him back to Hell His brothers, hissing, vengeance vowed As from the town they fled "We'll break you girl! We'll see you killed!' "Please try" was all she said And so the gates were shut upon the creatures of the night But still the danger was not gone Still all was not yet right "Beware!" in toned the wild-eyed priest His voice at fever pitch "A vampire is a heinous beast, But worse yet...is a witch!" "That girl has power like none before Tis evil St Paul She walks with darkness, Satan's whore She's here to damn us all!" "There's but one way to save this town And Please our heavenly sire To bring the wanton woman down" "And purge her soul with fire!: For most, it does not last so long The smoke their breath will take But she was strong, so very strong She burned up wide awake I brought her this, this great reward With talk of Destiny She cried out, "Father! Help me, Lord!" But kept her eyes on me The town made merry, gambled, dined They'd nothing now to fear They burned the darkness from my mind The world at last was clear For God is good... And God is kind... But he's not welcome here

Views on My Poem Please

Ok, this is a poem I wrote a little while ago and I wanted to know some peoples opinions. I personally like the poem but it is a little dark. A Dying Moment of Suicide The message I write I wrote for you As my final hour approaches I stretch my hand as far as I can So to be held by you one last time... But you never make it Time stands still You look at my now closing eyes Wishing me peace Knowing there is for me But living with my memory Each and every day Haunts you until your time When time stands still once more Knowing it was all worth it The pain gone from our eyes In the heavenly bliss we now share But people move onward We are soon forgotten Our bodies placed along side others Only to be visited every now and then Our Souls have moved on And time starts up again
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