bard of the streets's blog: " my poetry& some rants,raves...and fantasies"

will someone please tell me how i can read the comments on my blog...pleeeeeeeze!!!??!!!

beneath the sea, an oyster met a tiny grain of sand said the oyster,"you're a bother, you'll never be something so grand!" well, a diver brought up that oyster, shucked it open,then jumped! in surprise what once had been, that grain of sand, was delight to his old, weary eyes! a thing of such great beauty! yes,that tiny,grain of sand what had been seen, as a bother, was the pearl that he held in his hand. "now take this pearl my daughter, as you wear it, please, never forget! they, who some people view as a bother, may be pearls who they haven't yet met Copyright ©2004 Andrew R. Thornton

i'm at a loss here. i have no idea how this place works,and can use all the help i can get!

in the city by the bay a wild-eyed,ranting poet has birthed himself a vision with permission now,to show it! it started as a spark then so slowly start to smoulder such a tiny wisp of smoke then a flame emerged, much bolder! then the flame began to speak! "you will share things you've been shown!" but,not quite a revelation thoughts concealed,but always known thoughts covered up with garbage since the start,at point of birth graffitied bombs,of hatred! how some people have no worth then the flame ablaze! consuming all the weeds without,within from the ground the truth sprouts rampant! then!the voice!......"my son, begin" Copyright ©2002 Andrew R. Thornton

i sat at dawn,upon a dune and gazed out to,the sea a velvet mist came rolling in and gently swirled, 'round me. within a cloud,i did then dream they were your soft lips i kissed as a salty fragrance wafted, your features formed in mist. inviting! yes....enticing! i heard your song to me i stepped into the vision i walked out to,the sea. now there's no one,on the dune the wind has shifted sand within a cloud i did then fade disappearing from, the land Copyright ©2003Andrew R. Thornton

a fragrance wafted in the air down the cellar,up the stair the fragrance wafted through the house perceived by human,cat, and mouse it hung around then,burning eyes the children cringed,i heard their cries then mom came in ,with lysol armed to do battle with ,the scent that harmed she sprayed the air,the bad smell parted i blamed the dog..." 'TWAS HE THAT FARTED!" "would i lie to you?......." Copyright ©2004Andrew R. Thornton

i'd like to take your hand in mine and stroll along the shore just you,and i,the world shut out all static we ignore. as the sun sinks low,we'll find a spot perhaps,upon a dune and gaze in to,each others' eyes as we wait the rising moon. with blanket spread,we share,ourselves as the sea-breeze does enhance with touch and taste,we do explore as we give in,to,romance. as stars explode!! behind our eyes we share a secret grin for we know that we've discovered our passions,deep,within Copyright ©1997 Andrew R. Thornton

morganna! druid sorceress my lady of the mist i welcomed you into my dreams those dreams where first we kissed a rainbow spun around you! as you welcomed,open armed i tried at first,to run away! looked back!-too late!-was charmed i gave myself to your embrace your scent did stir my loins you had me so completely my senses all! purloined alabaster breasts did take my breath! your eyes as black as coal i completely gave my body! as you lured away my soul then came the morn,awakened! feeling empty,and very,very cold shameful tears fell to my cheeks as i realized,what i'd sold Copyright ©2002 Andrew R. Thornton