deftonette's blog: "Metrical Composition"

created on 03/26/2012 | http://fubar.com/metrical-composition/b347266

posted on 03/26/2012&nbs-07:00;@&nbs-07:00;01:03&nbs-07:00;pm

Better Days
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there is a soft glow around you,
those exact words cannot describe it.
i know there is much more about you,
but i feel you'd rather hide it...

from the moment that we kissed,
i thought too good to be true;
but now my heart plays a different song &
its written just for you.

in your eyes i can honestly see
how our love could grow so endlessly
& all the good things i could pry from thee
to help you become who you need to be.

i feel your soul enrapture me
when you look in my eyes so amorously...
to know that you trust in me could be the
best reality

i wish that you could grow old with me,
i know that sounds silly,
but thats how i dream it would be...
you me and perhaps a family,
a plan thats fit for just you & me.

and i know someday you will see
just how much you truly mean to me
loyal to you is what i'll always be
a muse for your eyes to once really see
just how hard i would try to make your life perfect
to not even give you the chance to think if i was worth it.

free from harm, worry & pain
i swear i'd never let any of those hurt you again.
every moment i have spent with you i wish was so much longer
& now that im away from you my heart seems to grow fonder

i feel like i have known you forever,
heres a simple thought for you to endeavor,
a spot in my heart; reserved just for you
a safe place for you to crawl inside when you feel real blue.

i hope i have not frightened you with how i feel inside,
its just a wonderful feeling;
a feeling i will not hide.

another poem i wrote. i was probably about 15/16 when i wrote this so don't judge so critically.

again - don't steal my stuff without asking. this is more of my own raw emotion.

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posted on 03/26/2012&nbs-07:00;@&nbs-07:00;01:03&nbs-07:00;pm

The Last of My Energy.
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there's so many things we could've done differently,

but this is us now and it's how we chose to be.

was it time and space that kept us apart,

or were these emotions all just false from the start?

the promises we made never seemed to last,

they turned into grains of sand and slipped through the hourglass.

the foundation that we laid, it took so long to build

& then it simply crumbled when our needs went unfulfilled.

mistakes were made and tears were shed,

but forgiveness was given while hearts still bled.

so emotions raged on in the depths of our souls,

and no words were said to truly repair our hope.

more time went by and nothing changed,

no sign of the sun, only clouds and rain.

things got harder as we grew more apart,

but one thing remained true;

i knew i still loved you in my heart.

so faced with a decision to prove my love for you,

i set your soul free, for you to start anew.
deep down i had wished,
that during our time apart,
that you would come back to me
and over we would start.
but now you've got a new girl

instead of me at your side,

while i'm left with all these feelings to

bury way deep inside.

so just once more for me, let me hear you say,

this is what you want now
and things will never be the same.

just cast me aside, its ok. i get it.

please let me go and don't ever regret it,

and don't come back after a few months go by,

just get on with your life - pretend that i've died.

for today is the day i will let it all go,

just once more ill tell you what i need you to know

the last of these words i truly do mean,