i'm writing some lyrics for a song that ive been working on for a couple of weeks. let me know what you think. if you have any ideas please let me know. please remember that it is in the works and not put together right so it's going to sound like crap.
why did you lie
with every breath,
each word contributed
to my death
words of deceit poured from your lips,
my blood fell off your finger tips
i loved you,
i trusted you,
i needed you,
why did you lie
you placed this knife in my heart
oh girl, you're tearing me apart
you llied to my face,
with each and every embrace
i loved you,
i trusted you,
i needed you,
you're killing me...
i loved you
okay that's where im stuck at.