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The darkening sky was full of rain clouds...
The rain falling in sheets.
A lone girl stands in a deserted street
in a deserted city.

The rain drenched her long black hair,
as it hung in her face
shielding it eyes from any stranger
that may see her.

Mixed in the rain
tiny rivers of tears
run down her face
and fall to the ground.

They come from within
from a heart
that has been broken
one too many times.

Her eyes no longer
glow with a life
and a fire, all has
been extinguished.

For now
the only things
her eyes show
and sorrow and despair.

She used to soar
above in all the happiness
but for now
her wings are no more.

Slowly,
one feather at a time,
they fell
till none remain.

And they were
blown away
with the winds of time
to a far away place.

And the only world
she will know
is that of the deserted city
and the rain always coming.

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Comments on this posting:
Dysthymia83
Offline (a tad less worried)
Johnston, RI
#1 of 1 -- April 29, 2008 @ 4:04 am
i loved this poem

i highly doubt you will suffer the fate of this angel.

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